Dear Liz, your lessons are really very useful and easy to understand. Thanks for the helpful instructions:) Could you help evaluate the following trial? I have a question about paraphrasing. Is it normal to paraphrase only the first sentence of the question, as I saw on a model essay. The second sentence was used as a thesis. Below is an example of a question. I would really appreciate it if you could give a model answer. Hello Liz and thank you for all the information you give us!! I would like to ask you the question. Can I add examples of my personal experience in this kind of essay? or do I give my opinion on the introduction and nowhere else? After deciding whether to accept or not and generating your support points, it`s time to start writing your essay. It is argued that countries should devote more resources to education than to recreational and competitive games. There is a consensus that national budgets should prioritize schools and universities over sport and play.
This essay will discuss, first, the economic benefits that the formation of a nation can bring and, second, the social benefits it enjoys; followed by a reasoned conclusion. Yes of course. This is a partial agreement (or a balanced approach). This means that you agree to some extent, but not 100%. So you would explain what you agree with and then add what remains to be taken into consideration. I find this approach sometimes very useful because it is easier to come up with unique ideas for each body sale, which leads to a more concentrated essay and also a better palette of languages. Look at my advanced writing task 2 lessons if you want more training: subscriptions.viddler.com/IELTSLizStore note: you don`t need to use this structure and other structures can give you a high score. However, this structure has been approved by IELTS auditors as such which allows you to write a clear and consistent essay. This structure allows you to focus on generating your ideas and then write an effective essay. I think I`ll have more ideas for A, so I choose this one. Always choose the one you feel good about, even if you don`t feel like that personally. You won`t get extra grades if you write about how you feel, you only want to give the examiner what they need to evaluate your essay with volume 7+.
Every trial, if approached in the right way, will be successful. When writing IELTS, it is important to keep in mind that different types of trials require different approaches.. . . .